Tyler. Can you please tell me more about your work?

Juliann, so sorry I couldn't respond to you yesterday! Everything looks good, you may move on if you haven't done so already.

Yes

ok can i move on

Gotcha. I saw your comment after I had posted. I updated my feedback

The point of the game is for Marie to get home without getting all scratched up by the eagle

Deven, I see we have a minecraft inflence. How is your game different than minecraft?

Autumn-Rose, I see a clear Aristocats influence on your cat character. I hope your vacation went well! I think that even thiugh you were a bit rushed you did a solid job of collecting references from different media. Move on to Objective 2!

My main character is inspired by Marie from Aristocats. My enemy is like the eagle from Snail Bob. The game takes place in a Paris garden. Although the movie is supposed to be in 1910 I used images of modern gardens to help me make my garden. In my game Marie is going through the garden trying to get home but there is an old eagle that lives in the garden. If she isn’t careful she will get clawed by the eagle. I was away for a week on vacation so I didn’t have much time. Origanally her brothers were supposed to be in the game so was Mr. O’Malley and Duchess. But they were cut because of me being away.

Calwat, looks very interesting. Like the idea of a survival game. Move on to the next Objective

my game is a survival game where your a business man who's plane crashes. He then has to survive. The hardest part was picking the type of game. i really like the drawing part of it. The items are based on what a person could create with the wilderness. The other object such as the match is found in the plane.

The main character is jack and the villain is the oggie boogie man he chases jack around his cave. jack has to collect dice in order to go to the next round, jacks long legs can help him jump hight to reach dice. I like tinker cad but i'm still not sure about this application. My biggest challenge was in tinker cad but over all it is great. i really wanted to make a full size jack skeleton. i think next time i will spend more time one this application. this was my third time 3d printing. my game is based off subaway surfers and im going to be makeing the game soon

This game is in the future, when a solar flare hits earth and we lose all of are electricity. The solar flare also creates strange creatures come out of the ground. When the earth takes over cities and town, the people of earth go back to the medieval times.

Jase, I can tell you put a lot of effort into your character's design! I'm very excited to see what you do. Once you write your concept up here you may move to Objective 2.

Alright, thank you Melanie. Move to Objective 2!

I plan on making a skeleton creeper and I made a different version of steve

Also Dillon, thanks for clarifying which Super Mario game you were referencing and how you plan on going about it. Not sure what the new features you plan on adding are, but I'm sure you will make it work.

RiLynn, just seeing your explanation, guess I had some lag. I think that is a really interesting take on classic Disney characters and I'm curious to see how it will all come together. Good luck moving forward!

Hailey, very well thought out characters! So the goal is to stop the dark haired girl from causing trouble at the shop then, right? I would pay close attention to the background of your game then. Think about what type of shop they are in and what is being sold, as well as how it is arranged. Good work, you may move on to Objective 2.

The game I am creating is the blonde girl is the main character and the dark haired girl is the enemy that comes is the shop and starts trouble.

RiLynn, I see we have some inspiration from Disney with the old hag and the poison apple and Tigger. Could you please tell me more about your plan? Once you have done that I think you will be good to move on to Objective 2.

So Tigger is the main character and he is trying to battle the Evil Queen from Snow White. Tigger fights the queen with little poison Piglet balls. The queen is the enemy and she is luring Tigger in with her poison apple.

Ashlee, Your concept is pretty clear and your characters are detailed and drawn out, go ahead and move on to Objective 2

Melanie, I see clear a Minecraft reference in your concept art. Could you tell me more about what you plan on doing?

yeti vs

panther they fight to death

Dillon, I see you plan on making your own version of Super Mario! I think that is a really neat idea and the classic Super Mario fits perfectly with Flowlab's format. However, since Super Mario has been around for as long as it has, I want to know what you plan on adding to it that will make it fresh. How is your take on Mario different than Nintendo's Mario? You will have no shortage of inspiration thanks to all of the Mario games starting from the first Super Mario Bros in 1985 all the way to the most current one, Super Mario Odyssey for the Nintendo Switch. Move on to Objective 2. Best of luck moving forward!

Colt, So we have a futuristic game. Is the world still recovering from the Great War? It looks like robots are a part of your world as seen in your items section. My one suggestion would be to make the main character's and the enemy's clothes different colors so that it will be easier to tell them apart. Right now they are a little too similar. Keep that in mind as you move on to Objective 2. Best of luck moving forward!

The takes place 200 years after A war called it the Great War

Wyatt, That is a really creative idea and the revenge of the turkey idea is very fitting with Thanksgiving right around the corner. Some of your sketches seem a little rushed, but I trust that you have a clearer picture in your head of what you want everything to look like. Go ahead and move to Objective 2 and good luck!

TRAILER:

the evil turkey is turning every one into his thanks giving meal.

But "stitches" was immune to the evil turkeys poison so he must now battle all the turkeys henchmen and stop the human race from being devoured.

Three uploads all at once! I'll wait for your descriptions before giving my comments.

This is just a generic mario game. It basically has the same assets and characters from Super Mario 3D World, but it has a few changes and additions.

Eden, I like the designs of your characters, excited to see what you make. Make sure you look into how to make your enemy move and attack on its own. You may move on to the next Objective.

This is a monster vs a village girl. I picked this because i like fighting and winning so i thought the girl would win because she's the main character.

Looks good Ashlyn. I would double check with the Flowlab Help tab to see if you can make a multiplayer game. If not, there are ways to make it so that the lion moves on its own and can chase the deer. Go ahead and move to Objective 2!

My sketch is of a deer and a lion. I choose a deer because I wanted to use the woods as the background and I thought that a lion would be creative to add into woods where it would not normally be. In this game there are two players, one is the deer and one is the lion. Whoever the lion is will chase the deer. The object of the game is to not get caught by the lion by weaving in and out throughout the trees.